The Watching

The Old Man, symbolized as a clock, or Father Time.

In an increasingly dystopian world, the Butler of Blackwater Manor, trying to keep the house working efficiently and take care of his staff, is faced with taking on a Hall Boy who doesn’t fit in and a variety of staff issues. While his world is gradually revealed to not be as he apprehended it, his efforts toward equitable treatment for the staff are tested to the limit.

First Draft Chapters Available

Remember, these are first draft, and subsequently aren’t very good. I’ve moved them behind a password wall – not a pay wall, you’ll just need to ask to get access to these SFD versions.

Chapter One – The New Hall Boy
Chapter Two – Lit Tennis Match
Chapter Three – The Picnic
Chapter Four – Know Your Place
Chapter Five – A Hard Day’s Night